Pond Haiku

18 Aug

Green, green pond water,
the sun, and brown-feathered ducks
ripple its surface.

 

ducks

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3 Responses to “Pond Haiku”

  1. troymullens August 18, 2009 at 8:57 pm #

    I like it.

    • ocksblog August 18, 2009 at 10:57 pm #

      thanks 🙂 appreciate the feedback

  2. spike September 2, 2009 at 3:16 pm #

    That was a cute little one sir, some really good rhythmic work on here.

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