Forever Beautiful – Love Poem

3 Oct

What we have is

something good

I can’t deny.

 

You are sweet without

sickly – true sweetness.

Your name means

“Forever Beautiful”.

(I almost cry to think)

 

No, beautiful,

what we have is beautiful,

you are beautiful

forever, in essence,

and what we have is

beautiful.

 

Beautifully sad too

because

beauty is not forever.

 

we have something

something good

something beautiful,

and sad,

because something is for now

and beauty is for now

you and I

we are for now.

But Nothing is.

Forever.

 

 

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10 Responses to “Forever Beautiful – Love Poem”

  1. Jerry Pat Bolton October 3, 2010 at 8:09 pm #

    A beautiful poem of love. The truism of love everlasting is put to test, because nothing last forever. I liked your arrangement and the buildup of love only to lower its expectations with the notion that it, like everything, does not last forever. Even a memory doesn’t last forever, because too soon we die and with that final gasp the memory is gone.

    • ocksblog October 4, 2010 at 5:56 pm #

      hi Jerry, thanks, and good to see you are still checking my page, it’s a nice boost to my morale!

  2. redhead February 15, 2011 at 4:39 pm #

    its nicely tricky. i similed at the last line of words even it doesn’t pertaining to positive side but reality…

    • ocksblog February 16, 2011 at 2:31 am #

      Thanks for the comment,

      yes it ends on a down-note. Everything ends on a down-note, unfortunately!

  3. lindastudley February 16, 2011 at 2:39 pm #

    Lovely. You have caught a whisp of the ephemeral quality of beauty and love. Very bittersweet and haunting.

    • ocksblog February 16, 2011 at 2:54 pm #

      thank you!
      I am glad it made you feel that way

  4. Martyn Heath February 27, 2011 at 6:24 pm #

    Great poem mate. Very moving and deep, stirs up a bit of melancholy and sorrow but it works because of that.

    • ocksblog February 28, 2011 at 12:55 am #

      cheers Martyn,
      thanks for reading, I appreciate it!

  5. eddychambers February 12, 2012 at 11:04 pm #

    Hey,
    It is first time I come across your poems and there are very well written. I especially like this one because it looks at beauty in many different shades of light. Keep it up. Eddy C.

    • ocksblog February 17, 2012 at 6:07 pm #

      hi Eddy,
      thanks very much for reading, liking and commenting. I hadn’t checked here for quite a while but it’s great to get a comment as it reminds me: “Ock: you really should write some more poetry soon!”

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